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- Write up your brand values and turn
them into a crisp story

- Tell that story all over, stop people
in the street, blog, tweet and watch
reactions, use them, make it better

- Each time you tell it, say more with
less words. Iterating your story is
cheap.

- Eventually you will concentrate the
story into fewer words / sound bites
that convey the full value in an
emotionally satisfying, crisp way

- When you have it crisp check that it
is still simple, credible and concrete.
Is there a surprise/"aha!" moment?

Does it still start with an interesting first word? The first word of MakeItCrisp.com is Riveting!
"Saturday morning programming club" would not
have worked as well as "CoderDojo"
Crisp = Investible
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CoderDojo.com
Works!
Don't be boring bozos!
-click here to sample what boring bozos do-
Taken from actual rubbish pitches.
Funny is good too see www.paraprosdokianfun.com for hints on how to add witty humor.
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Tutorial Video - remember though your pitch must work as text first!
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